Harold evans, his new back is called do i make myself clear while writing well matters. The active voice is the way to write. The passive voice by and large creates more words and has no energy. Let me give you an example. Neil armstrong landed on the man today, active voice. The passive voice says the moon was landed on by Neil Armstrong today. The official language if i analyze the report how he got on the plane, its full of things like it can safely be said and steps were taken. Who took the steps, what did they do. Its all passive. Rose we conclude with alan alda called if i understood you, would i have this look on my face . My as ventions in the art of science and relating and communicating. Its like when two actors are on the stage and they are really listening to each other, when im doing that, i dont say my next line because its in the script, i say it because you do something or Say Something that makes me say it and then makes me say it a certain way. And something comes out
Reporters in a lot not far from the corn field where the search for the missing was on going. Friday, the setting was counter officsetting was countyoffices. We brought four young men one step closer to their loved ones and so they can rest in peace. Reporter according to Cosmo Dinardos thursday confession, jimi patrick the Gifted College student on a full scholarship was the first to die. On july 5th he and dinardo went to the corn field with a 20yearold 20yearold says he shot him after a pot deal went bad with a 22 caliber rival and buried him in a 6foot deep grave. Next to be killed, dean finocchiaro. Also at the corn field a 20yearold man now arrested and described as his cousin sean kratz shoots him with dinardos mothers 357 handgun. Dinardo fires at him while on the ground. Kratz says he didnt shoot finocchiaro. And finally on the seventh of july, mark sturgis and thomas meo meet dinardo in a lot at nearby peddlers village. They leave meo cars in garage on a dinardo family owned
A dc10 laying down thousands of retardant. Meanwhile dozens of bulldozer desperately scrape around town. While hand crews use muscle to form breaks. We just watered everything down. Reporter and those doing what they can to save their homes. This woman owned this historic home for six generations. My dad has done a lot of hard work, hard work on it. Reporter their bay Area Neighbors also staying put and fighting for their summer home. We will be here until it gets too hot to stay. Reporter ever where we turned we saw bay area firefighters helping to protect properties. Th this house has been here for 120 years and i think it will be here after this fire. It is special. Very special. Reporter continues to actively burn here in the hills. Both coulterville and mariposa not out of the woods. Although the chief says mariposa is looking better. But it is heading north towards coulterville and that is the concern. Thank you very much thom. Want to show you this. This is one of their cars tak
Of high speed travel and up vent tore will bring it right here to philadelphia he has a plan. A massive forest fire. And first. Mr. Simpson i do vote to grant parole when eligible and that will conclude this hearing. Thank you. A unanimous decision after nearly 9 years in prison, o. J. Simpson will be a free man soon. The one time football star once again returned to headlines his parole hearing car i idea live on tell viing as cross the nation. Im ukee washington. Im jessica dean. Simpson, now 70 years old could be released as early as october 1. He spent more than eight years in prison dont for hotel room hight in las vegas. He testified before the parole board. All four parole commissioners who conducted the hearing voted for his release after a half hour of deliberation. Two criminal Defense Attorneys have differenting views on the parole decision. Ukee, completely different rules. He was supposed to serve 33 years in prison. At times he was apologetic and other times he made execu
Simpson will be a free man soon. The one time football star once again returned to headlines his parole hearing car i idea live on tell viing as cross the nation. Im ukee washington. Im jessica dean. Simpson, now 70 years old could be released as early as october 1. He spent more than eight years in prison dont for hotel room hight in las vegas. He testified before the parole board. All four parole commissioners who conducted the hearing voted for his release after a half hour of deliberation. Two criminal Defense Attorneys have differenting views on the parole decision. Ukee, completely different rules. He was supposed to serve 33 years in prison. At times he was apologetic and other times he made executions. Ultimately hell be a free man. One defense attorney believes he could easily go back to jail if hes not careful. Im sorry it happened. 70yearold o. J. Said he was wrong to join armed associates to get his personal belongings back from sports memoriabilia dealer in 2007. That deal